This is beautiful, it has very strong feelings, and lots of emotion

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just curious - you got any idea what it's about?

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Well, I've probably got it wrong, but does it mean like your addicted to loving someone and you love the feeling but it sort of gets too much until you can't cope..? It's kinda hard to explain.. Sorry if i got the wrong idea :S

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close...i used the loving some as a metaphor for an addiction to drugs.

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Hey, it made a lot more sense once i read it as a metaphor for drugs because it seemed like a strange way to express love for a person. I really like the idea and it works well i'm just not too sure about the rhyme sometimes it works and sometimes it seems a tad forced, but that could just me, or because i'm still associating the words with a person. Anyway it's an interesting take on addiction which i like xxx

This is very deep with lots of emotion.

Quite a fascinating poem... it made even more sense once I had clarified what it was about... I wasn't sure, I thought it was just about a normal relationship until I read

"We've already joined so many times
You've written so many lines..."

And I was thinking, hmmm, either that's a VERY forced rhyme (lol) or a reference to something. Obviously it was the latter... anyways..

I really enjoyed it; I've always found that to be an interesting concept... great work.

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hmmm love poem about Erin?
or doesnt one of your stalkers have you tied up somewhere?

any way hey mate...
hows everything?
yeah im a bit pissed..
i was planing to move to auckland but now i have to move back to levin...
the thing thats really got me is the fact i will have little to no internet ...

im going to go insane...
bah i hope you are well...

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i know who its about...

sounds like my life, for a while there it sounds gay "I feel you inside of me And it's so good I can't believe. You fill the void in my life" sounds utterly homosexual there, till the next line. which redeems you. he he, about erin, is that person foolish? love is not a drug, it is only a feeling of extreme lust and comfort that you feel with one particular person, that you feel you can tell them anything, and the truth. but that you also feel a connection after a while like you start to think alike, when all it is is that you know each other that well that you can tell what they are thinking. then comes the physical side, now i cant say i know a THING about sex, ive only scratched the surface of foreplay (though you wouldnt think it from my literature). but yeah all sex is, is a physical dependancy on someone else because you cant do it for yourself.

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