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Journal Entry: Sat Mar 25, 2006, 5:50 AM
Lost in this ocean
Of doubt and deception
I need an escape from this perpetual motion
Longing for hard ground, to stop my regression.

You seemed so understanding,
but your wants are too demanding.
You tell me I'm strong
But I guess you were wrong.

I hope you find what you're searching for,
It seemed to be here, but it must've been lore.
Without you in my life, I am lost ever-more,
But I will carry on, be better than before.

You seemed so understanding,
but your wants are too demanding.
I still want to be with you,
but I find no reason to.

[this time won't you please, drive faster]

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~PartlyBlonde:iconPartlyBlonde: Mar 25, 2006, 8:23:42 PM
I think I know what that's about....very nice David :hug:

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~DiamondKido:iconDiamondKido: Mar 26, 2006, 12:01:42 AM
Whoa, where u been sunshine? and how u been?

Lovely poem btw, very nice :)

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~ruchy:iconruchy: Mar 26, 2006, 8:14:56 PM
i think you think you know what it's about is right

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~ruchy:iconruchy: Mar 26, 2006, 8:15:55 PM
i've never not been here, just been hiding...

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~DiamondKido:iconDiamondKido: Mar 27, 2006, 12:39:46 AM
Ha fair call

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"Now all us Californians need to work on is California breaking off from the rest of the U.S to go hang with Hawaii...Alaska can come to...
THE END!"
~ravensamdear:iconravensamdear: Mar 27, 2006, 8:59:13 AM
Very nicely done.

Now, why the hell don't you communicate?!

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I'm melodramatic... so what?
~SaloHcin:iconSaloHcin: Mar 27, 2006, 4:29:09 PM
Good shit mate...

its been a long time

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~ruchy:iconruchy: Mar 28, 2006, 5:05:38 AM
sometimes to learn the most about people you have ignore them..and disappear..i needed to.

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~ruchy:iconruchy: Mar 28, 2006, 5:08:13 AM
i still do, maybe you just are listening?

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